Homework
On the weekend there was a ruby game. The teams were Turbos VS North Harbour. It was at Palmerston North FMG Stadium at 2:35. My mum and I got to the stadium 1 hour early so we got to see the teams Warmup. At the start of the game they had Helipro Helicopter come flying though holding a person with a ruby ball. (this is a good way to advertise their helicopter) The weather was very windy. The helicopter was shaking and when she had a shot she missed the barrel she was aiming for. She could of won $1000 but she still got $100 for having a go. After that the match started, it felt like the match was going on and on and on and on then finally the turbos scored, it was a try. The turbos scored again, it was a try. The score is 10 /0 to the turbos then North scores a try. The conversion failed because the wind blew the ball away from the goal. Maybe if the wind was not blowing so hard he might of got it
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Hi Callum
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that you can improve on is punctuation. You have done really well with writing task because you added lots of detail
Amy =)