My Writing - Proof reading and editing

Birthday party

School Journal

Kowhaiwhai patters

Flow Chart

DRAFT:

My Pet Ginnie Pig

DRAFT

We have capital letters at the start ofeach sentence and full stops at the ends?
we use adjectives to make the descriptions better? (these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
we have a clear beginning, middle andend?
We use different openings to sentences?Like: Suddenly the... All was silent...Despite...Fortunately...
We use connectives to extend ideas andsentences? e.g. and, because, so etc. Weuse time connectives e.g. later on... meanwhile...
We write it all in the same ‘person’ (whichone?) e.g first, second or third person
We can use similes and metaphors e.g he isas hairy as a cat...her spotty cheetah facepeered around the corner...
We have a plan and have written inparagraphs.

Weekly Reflection