Thursday, 12 September 2013

Homework

On the weekend there was a  ruby game. The teams were Turbos VS North Harbour. It was at Palmerston North FMG Stadium at 2:35. My mum and I got to the stadium 1 hour early so we got to see the teams Warmup. At the start of the game they had Helipro  Helicopter come flying though holding a person with a ruby ball.      (this is a good way to advertise their helicopter)     The weather was very windy. The helicopter was shaking and when she had a shot she missed the barrel she was aiming for. She could of won $1000 but she still got $100 for having a go. After that the match started, it felt like the match was going on and on and on and on then finally the turbos scored, it was a try. The turbos scored again,  it was a try. The score is 10 /0 to the turbos then North scores a try. The conversion failed because the wind blew the ball away from the goal. Maybe if the wind was not blowing so hard he might of got it


Conjunction 
Because 
And
But
Maybe 
If


Pronouns
She
My 
I
Their
It
We

1 comment:

  1. Hi Callum
    The only thing that you can improve on is punctuation. You have done really well with writing task because you added lots of detail

    Amy =)

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