W.A.L.T: Entertain
Description: In Troys writing group we have been given the topic what if our teacher was late, we had to try make it as crazy as we could. We had two ways of writing it, we could make a comic strip or or make a story with a photo like what I have done.
Self evaluation: I think that I have done a good job at having a small amount and making as detailed as I could, another thing that I think that I have done well is try to set it at 1971because they did not have the typing material that we have today or the cars, I really like the police car photo it brings it I well. One thing that I could work on is maybe making better use if my space for photos and more text on the dumbly that comes in, to make it suspenseful.
Is this because your actual teacher WAS late? Haha! Great line where everyone turned into exploding - that was un-expectant.
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