Caving Writing

WALT: Entertain

Purpose: To tell about an experience from camp, using short sentences to create suspense.

Wednesday April 2nd 2014

The activity I was most looking forward to I had to do it last. Plus I was really scared so that didn't help at all But I was thinking oh nah it’ll be fine. Going down in the  V6 (sweet). I was really nervous. Talking to Jason made me feel better. But I was wondering what would happen. Most of my friends came back all muddy with cuts and bruises. I was just hoping my shoes did not get ripped.

 It will be a ok . Then I get out thinking it can’t be that bad it’s in the middle of nowhere. We walk down the slippery muddy path. James is talking about all these land  markers to tell us were to go. Then we see these little baby red and white mushrooms. If touch them we aren't allowed any lunch. Because they are poisonous.

 But the suspense is making me hungry any way. When are we going to get their?  Yay Where here. Oh know I thought that it would not be so steep or rocky. Now we are going into the cave it is really scary. I’m thinking gees I hope a weta doesn't drop on me. We are half way in the cave now. I have to do mini moo then we come to the end. Now I see a little tiny gap. We have a choice to go under the tiny gap or turn back. I chose to go under thinking I hope I don’t get stuck. I go under get on my arms and knees and push threw. I feel a crawfish go over my pinking. Now my knees are really hurtingg because I have heaps of bruises finally I'm out then we are allowed to go back but just say “no thanks”.

By Callum

(Sorry I forgo the date)

The activity I was most looking forward to I had to do it last. Plus I was really scared so that didn't help at all But I was thinking oh nah it’ll be fine. Going down in the  V6 (sweet). I was really nervous. Talking to Jason made me feel better. But I was wondering what would happen. Most of my friends came back all muddy with cuts and bruises. I was just hoping my shoes did not get ripped. It will be a ok . Then I get out thinking it can’t be that bad it’s in the middle of nowhere. We walk down the slippery muddy path. James is talking about all these land  markers to tell us were to go. Then we see these little baby red and white mushrooms. If touch them we aren't allowed any lunch. Because they are poisonous. But the suspense is making me hungry any way. When are we going to get their?  Yay Where here. Oh know I thought that it would not be so steep or rocky.

Wednesday march 26th 2014

The activity I was most looking forward to I had to do it last. But I was thinking oh nah it’ll be fine. Going down in the V6 (sweet). It will be fine. Then I get out thinking it can’t be that bad it’s in the middle of nowhere. We walk down the slippery muddy path. James is saying about all these land markers to tell us were to go. Then we see these little baby red and white mushrooms. If touch them we aren't allowed any lunch.Because they are poison. But the suspense is making me hungry any way. When are we going to get their?  Yay Where here. Oh know I thought that it would not be so steep or rocky.

O.M.G The cave is so big so I thought. It is starting to get