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Wednesday, 6 November 2013

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Fireworks
On the news they say go to a public fireworks display. It is too dangerous to let fireworks off at home. But I mean it is only dangerous if you are silly around them. Once my mum told me  about a young boy who  brought fireworks from the Wharehouse. Some of the fireworks did not light so his mum put them in the bin. He got the fireworks back out and tried to relight them. He successfully got one to ignite but it burst into flames. His hair caught on fire and burnt his face. He is a grown man now but still has scares on his face from those burns. But was he being silly or not? Yes he was being silly. If you are not silly around fireworks then you do not need go to a show.  I think that either way you are still going to get pretty cool fireworks display. I like shows as much as home fireworks. 
I was doing fireworks with my friend  and his mum. It was so much fun. We took at least 4 steps back incase one of the fireworks miss fired. Y
Tis helped us to stay safe.
My favourite firework was the fire work that had heaps of sparks and crackles. It felt like we were on top of the clouds watching a firework display. 

Good Job. Nice writing. I think you did well at writing your point of view.
By Callum


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