Holiday Writing - DRAFT

Because me and my dad were to meet and me dad are going to go on                                  

to got to the fery

I am in the car with my mum. Then suddenly when were driving around the conner we saw a wave come up the side of the road. That day was meant to be calm. What it would be on a rough day, I wish mum was going faster because I really busting to go see my dad I had not seen my dad in three months when mum pulled the car up I was jumping in my shoes when i saw my dad it was so exiting seeing my dad.

Focus - Recount writing

Purpose (Why are we writing)- to capture a moment in time over the holidays...

W.A.L.T write a recount about the holidays

Recount writing - This is what we think a recount is...

if you write then you look back onto it

is like something that has already happened

remembering something that has already happened - vivid image

you look back on something and you write about it

retelling something that has happened

Co constructed - Success criteria

make sure you write about a part of your holidays that you remember really well

make sure you don’t go too far, just keep it at that moment

at least 100 words

punctuation

paragraphs

our writing needs to be in order

Plan using who, what, when, why