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Sunday, 16 November 2014

Let Me Take A Selfy

The main people in this article is Collins English Dictionary group because with out them they would not have a word of the year, with out the word of the this post would not be here.
The word photobomb being the word of the year and because they talk about Photo bombing the most.
this event took place on the internet because they did not have a meeting or anything like that.
The date on witch this event took place was 15/11/14 because this is when it got published and kiwi kids news is update.
Every year they name a word of the year this has being ages as well.



Here are some more photo bombing















Thursday, 30 October 2014

Goals Athletics

Description: 
In class we have been told to do 
three goals that 
we can work 
towards. 



Wednesday, 24 September 2014

Two Stars And A Wish End Of Term Reflection

Dicrioption: At the end of this term we are doing a reflection this is a two stars and a wish reflection. The two stars are things that I have done well the wish is something I won't to improve on.

Thursday, 18 September 2014

Inquiry Sample

WALT:  gather information

Description: Each Wednesday we have been working through the Get it, Sort it, Use it model to inquire about different countries around the world and their languages/culture. We each brainstormed a potential list of subjects and chose what we wanted to find out more about and then started our research.










What are you most proud of and why? I am proud that I have learnt heaps of mandarin like how to count and how to say basic phrases.

What did you find challenging? I think that the hardest thing was keeping it in my head, but sometimes it slips my mind and I only remember a little bit.

My next ‘Get It’ goal is? My next goal it to try and make my poster more detailed in numbers maybe like 100 and so on, plus I would like to learn some more.



Wednesday, 17 September 2014

Writing Task Why Is My Teacher Is late

W.A.L.T: Entertain
Description: In Troys writing group we have been given the topic what if our teacher was late, we had to try make it as crazy as we could. We had two ways of writing it, we could make a comic strip or or make a story with a photo like what I have done.
Self evaluation: I think that I have done a good job at having a small amount and making as detailed as I could, another thing that I think that I have done well is try to set it at 1971because they did not have the typing material that we have today or the cars, I really like the police car photo it brings it I well. One thing that I could work on is maybe making better use if my space for photos and more text on the dumbly that comes in, to make it suspenseful.

Thursday, 11 September 2014

Math Sample



WALT: Continue a pattern and describe it using a rule

Description: For maths this term we have been learning a range of strategies to help us solve algebra problems.


Task:  Make a short movie to prove that you have achieved your maths goal.


Criteria:


  • Show, explain, prove your goal and how you did it
  • Clear message
  • Two questions to show your learning
  • Correct answer


Evaluation:
  1. What are you most proud of and why? I am proud of the time that my video is in, it has so much detail of how I explained the question.


  1. What challenged you the most and why? I think getting this done in the time given was hard because I could have had more spoken more about the problem and try to connect to the people watching.


  1. Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? Next Time if I had more time would go in more deeper detail in time to maybe ask myself questions and answer them.

Feedback/Feedforward: I like the way that you spoke clearly in your video. I don't think i have any feedforward it's really good.

Monday, 8 September 2014

Reading Sample

WALT:Read With accuracy 
Description: In Nic's Reading we have been working on a titanoboa poster.  We have read a book on it, then we had to study it, then we had to put our knowledge about it into a poster, on how to escape a titanoboa.


Evaluation:
What are you most proud of and why? I am proud of my lettering and my fonts stand out and all the coulors work together.

What challenged you the most and why? I think finding the perfect colour to match the photo in the backround was the most hardest. 

Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? I can work towards getting more ideas on the the page and I need to do it faster.

Feedback/Feedforward:Kaleb that is relly cool how you had a picture of it and thanks for the tips maybe next time you could have some more lettering.

Wednesday, 3 September 2014

Writing Task

                        What If Time Froze

I wake up in the morning go to check the time think, oh, 
“it’s a broken” oh well I’ll just check the time on my iPad .
Wow that is not working ether lucky we have one more clock thats
not working ether I’ll look out the window at the clock tower thats frozen. 
I think that time has frozen. 

I’m going to go to all you can eat buffet all I can because 
there is no time for when they shut. Then I would go on a 
quad bike, go top speed then school’s won’t be open so there
is no reduced speed. 

I would say to the reef that the time is up then 
he looks at the time then he thinks it has been time so the they win.
Then I would go and get a self-ey with with some famous people
in press conference's so the time would not move they would be 
there for ever and ever and ever. 

Plus I would get to miss school, it would not 
of started at midnight. Then I would go to the video shop and then
 I would rent all the video’s now.
Now could you really do all of this if time had not froze.

By Callum

Do's And Don'ts

W.A.L.T:Entertain
Task:Create a list of do's and don'ts in a 
place of your chose.

Description: In Troy's writing group I have chosen to do, Do's And Don'ts. What we did was set a scene. My was a swimming pool. We have to write a list of 5 do's. Do's are a list of sensible things. Now we also have to make a list of don'ts that can be as silly as we won't because our WALT is to entertain. But they have to relate to each other in a funny manner.



Thursday, 21 August 2014

The Learning Pit

The Learning Pit

WALA: The Learning Pit

Description: We have been learning about when good learning happens.  

Task: Share what you know about the learning pit.






  • List at least 3 feelings that you might have when you are in the pit.
  • List at least 3 strategies that you could use to get out of the pit.
  • Label where good learning happens.
  • List 3 things you could say to yourself when you are in the pit.


Evaluation:
Reflect on a time when you have been in the pit.
    • How did you feel when you were in the pit?  I felt like I was never going to get any work done and it was very stressful but I just kept saying I can do this.
    • What did you do to work out of the pit? I just kept on saying this is ok I can do this. But the main thing help me get out was putting my head down and doing my work.

Feedback/Feedforward you did good at explaining what the pit was like if I was a aline I won't know but you would of explained it to me and I think you need to get better at as much less words.
Reagan .

Wednesday, 20 August 2014

My Remarkable Adventure

WALT:  Entertain


Description: We read the poem “My Remarkable Journey” which inspired us to write our own remarkable journeys about why our homework wasn’t at school.
My Story 
                           I wake up in the morning only to remember my HOMEWORK!!!
 I go down stairs only to see, a big fat mountain troll, in my bath. I jump out of my window, find out that my backyard has turned into a jungle, I climb up a tree up a tree find myself back in my room. Go down stairs wondering what what I will see. It seem all ok but when I go around the corner I see, seven slimy slivering snakes coming all around. But they sound like seven bashing Building bull dosers. When I slipped and knocked my head. I wake see my body its ok but I'm in snake. Luckily the snake dose not like because I have not a shower in 4 days. Gross I go to have a nice hot shower. I turn on the shower thought oh this is a nice shower oh, this is thicker then normal thats. Wow that pongs wait I think that it sirige ōw, I run to a towel scrap it all off then I put some clothes on. Turn around find it has turned into a monster run  out the door grab my bag see it still chasing.
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I am still running to scared to look back keep running I say. When I look back I see you it's gone Yes school. Then I see you Mr Bridge.
                                                         In all the mayhem I forgot my
                                                            homework and why I stink.

                                                                      The End 
                                                                    By Callum


Criteria:
We decided that a quality piece of writing has the following things. Reflect on whether these things are in your story:
Introduction: It hooks the reader in the first few lines making them want to read more
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Punctuation: Is your writing ready for a reader? Does your punctuation make it easy for them to read?
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Short sentences: Do you create suspense by using these in your writing?
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Onomatopoeia: Are these in your writing to create impact?
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Alliteration: Are these in your writing to create impact?
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Similes/Metaphors: Are these in your writing to create impact?


Evaluation:
1. What do you think is the best part of your story?
I think that the first bit of my writing is the best because it really hooks me in and I want to read more. Because if your reader dose not want to read more there is not much point in me writing.


2. What was the hardest part about completing this portfolio sample?
I think that the hardest part was in the middle trying to keep up the same sort of excitement up at the same level also, the ending was hard to come of slowly not to be just like done when he gets to school.


3.  Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?
Next time I work on this I would try to make it much longer due to time I just have tryed to make it short and detailed.

Feedback/Feedforward You did good of adding detail and you made it funny you added. You might want to add more of the story And more onomatopoeia.

Thursday, 14 August 2014

Te Reo Maori Poster

WALT: communicate a message.


Description: We have been participating in 3 different workshops around colour, compositions and fonts.  We put these skills to use in a poster sharing our knowledge about Te Reo Maori.
Why? We have noticed that our posters are too cluttered and do not communicate a  message well.


Task: Make a poster about Te Reo Maori.


Criteria:
Message: My message is clear and purposeful.  Everything that is on my poster relates to my message.


Composition:  My poster is balanced. target green.jpg



Font:  My font is clear, readable and suits the message.target green.jpg



Colour:  I have used 2-3 colours that are complementary.  My background choice makes the text pop! Target yellow.jpg



Accuracy:  All of the words on my poster are spelt correctly.target green.jpg



Evaluation:
  1. What are you most proud of and why? I proud of the originality of this idea as well as the good use of the workshops.


  1. What challenged you the most and why?
I think that the time was a factor but it was hard picking an idea to go with because we had so many ideas.
  1. Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?
Next time I would work on my coulor and I think our poster could of had a few more words but not so much that it was wordy.
Feedback/Feedforward: I really the different fonts you used. I see that you applied what you learnt at the workshops. Next time you can work on adding different colours. 
From Josiah


Thursday, 7 August 2014

Maori Poster

WALT: communicate a message.

Description: We have been participating in 3 different workshops around colour, compositions and fonts. We put these skills to use in a poster sharing our knowledge about Te Reo Maori. 


Hiwi The Kiwi Writing

My baby sister she is making a racket. When my dad and I went into town 
we looked for a nice shop. We saw this little we toy, it looked very cool so we got it. 
Now we went home georgina was crying her lungs out. When we gave her toy she was
laughing her lungs out her lungs out. I said to my dad maybe we could take her fishing when she is 
five because her toy 
was 
a fish.


Georgina wake up its time to go. “Ok dad” Callum you ready yes I say. 
“But do we have everything” like what he says, well we do have two life jackets 
one for each of you. Dad don’t be silly you need one to ok son the way we will rent one.
While we are are there we will need to rent a box of flares incas we crash. 
Now get the wet towel, for when we catch  the snapper, oh don’t forget salt ice.

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Now finally we are in the boat this is taking forever said georgina.
“don’t speck to soon you got a nibble” remember your wet 
towel to pick up the fish then put the fish in salt ice.


Now it might be under size but it may not be as well.
perfect this will be a nice snapper.
lets take it to a 

butcher.

Wednesday, 2 July 2014

Smart Goals

W.A.L.T:Set smart goals 


My writing goal is to write a variety of simple, compound and complex sentences.
The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is because I think that it is good to write in different ways in your stories.
I will accomplish my goal by trying to put this into use in my writing and playing arround with it, plus make sure that I edit it.

My reading goal is to infer meaning in (ideas and information not directly stated in the text across longer, more complex text.
The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is because I think that it is good to look more into a book then just read it.
I will accomplish my goal by when I do reading I will look more into the book when I finish a chapter I will try to read slower so I understand more.

My maths goal is to chose the most appropriate stradegy for a given problem.
The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is because I think once you know heaps of stratiges you need to know how and when to use them.
I will accomplish my goal by looking over at all my other stratiges I have learnt when I face a hard math problem.

My personal goal is to Focas on the learning intention more.
The reason I have chosen this is because I need to keep my post as much as I can to what we are doing and I can keep up with the standard.
I will accomplish this by checking my post to the citeria every onece in a while I am working on my post.


Monday, 30 June 2014

Hungi

WALT:inform
Today nic and some teachers made a hangi. Nic started the fire and then he cared it on. 
He is going to put the food into Cook it.


Thursday, 26 June 2014

End Of Term Reaflection

My end of term reflection


WALT: evaluate our learning honestly


What is an effective learner? A learner that puts their head gets on with learning. They know who their blockers and drivers are. They always complete their work to a high standard.

What were the highlights for this term? Why? My end of term highlight would be the roller disco because it got every one together and it help us with our end of term goal integrity. It helped us think about others just not our self.

What were your greatest challenges this term?  Why? My over all challenge would be my writing sample because, I had to write down a story then I had to reread it. Then I had to make it a few more paragraphs longer. Then I had to put it all on my computer plus I had put a pitcher of my writing on there had to be, peer assessment and self assessment as well.

How are you going towards acting with integrity? Why?  How could you improve? I think that most of of the time I show integrity but maybe when I am walking past a pen I won't pick it up because I wont to get to the mat before on time next time I would try to pick it up.


What are your goals in our learner disposition wall?  Where to next?` On the wall I am a self directed learner I think that I am nearly out of it. I feel like I can move up but it would be to much. So I need to work on getting faster on my work so that I can get more done.



is working at the (Beginning/Middle/Advanced)  Level 3.  Can Do      Needs to work on
National Standard by the end of Year 4
Creates texts in order to meet the writing demands across the NZ Curriculum AT LEVEL 2
National Standard by the end of Year 5
Creates texts in order to meet the writing demands across the NZ Curriculum TOWARDS LEVEL 3
National Standard by the end of Year 6
By the end of Year 6, students are required to write more complex texts than students in Year 5.
(Increasing Independence & Complexity)
Creates texts in order to meet the writing demands across the NZ Curriculum AT LEVEL 3
AUDIENCE, PURPOSE, AND VOICE
Purpose:
a. I independently write texts using language and a simple text structure that suits my audience and purpose (recounting, describing, narrating, reporting, arguing or explaining). e.g. an orientation,  sequenced events described in the past tense and linking words to show sequence (for a recount).
b. I independently create a variety of texts in a range of print and electronic media..
Ideas & Voice:
a. I write about several experiences or ideas including mostly relevant detail or personal comment.
b. I use mostly relevant information that often includes detail and/or comment supporting the main points.
c. I demonstrate an awareness of my audience through appropriate choice of content, language, and text form.
Vocabulary:
a. I use a variety of adjectives, adverbs, nouns and verbs that clearly convey ideas, experiences or information.
b. I expand my writing vocabulary by using reference resources to check the meanings of words and to find new words.
c. I apply my knowledge of the meaning of most common prefixes and suffixes.
Written Language Features:
I use written language features to support meaning. e.g. similes, onomatopoeia.
Publishing:
I make choices, when appropriate, for publishing in a variety of media, including digital and visual media
AUDIENCE, PURPOSE, AND VOICE
Purpose:
I apply a process and write texts choosing language and overall text structures that suit my audience and purpose (recounting, describing, narrating, reporting, arguing or explaining) e.g. an orientation, a problem, a climax, and a satisfying resolution (for a narrative), or an introduction, a series of main points, and a logical conclusion (for a report).
Ideas, Voice, & Impact:
a. I write about several experiences or ideas including detail or personal comment.
b. I use content that is relevant to the curriculum task or items of information and include detail and/or comment supporting the main points.
c. I use written language features (such as emotive vocab) to extend or clarify meaning and to engage my audience.
Vocabulary:
a. I use technical and subject specific vocabulary, precise and descriptive words to support meaning and for effect (to create a mental image).
b. I use a wide variety of precise and effective descriptive words (adjectives, adverbs, nouns, and verbs) and adjectival and adverbial phrases that clearly convey ideas, experiences, or information.
Written Language Features:
I use similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, and imagery to support meaning and for effect (to create a mental image).
Publishing:
I choose appropriate media for creating text or publishing, including visual and digital.
AUDIENCE, PURPOSE, AND VOICE
Purpose:
I apply a process and write texts choosing language and overall text structures that suit my audience and purpose (recounting, describing, narrating, reporting, arguing or explaining) e.g. an orientation, a problem, a climax, and a satisfying resolution (for a narrative), or an introduction, a series of main points, and a logical conclusion (for a report).
Ideas, Voice, & Impact:
a. I write about several experiences or ideas including detail or personal comment.
b. I use content that is relevant to the curriculum task or items of information and include detail and/or comment supporting the main points.
c. I use written language features (such as emotive vocab) to extend or clarify meaning and to engage my audience.
Vocabulary:
a. I use technical and subject specific vocabulary, precise and descriptive words to support meaning and for effect (to create a mental image).
b. I use a wide variety of precise and effective descriptive words (adjectives, adverbs, nouns, and verbs) and adjectival and adverbial phrases that clearly convey ideas, experiences, or information.
Written Language Features:
I use similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, and imagery to support meaning and for effect (to create a mental image).
Publishing:
I choose appropriate media for creating text or publishing, including visual and digital
STRUCTURE
Sentences & Grammar:
a. Sentences:
i. I write mainly simple and compound sentences that vary in their beginnings, structures and lengths.
ii. I attempt complex sentences using connectives such as when, how, because, although, with, as.
b. Grammar:
I use the correct tense, pronouns and sentences that are mostly grammatically correct. (**see LLP for further details.)
Planning:
I plan and organise ideas and information using tools (e.g. graphic organisers) and strategies (e.g. headings).
Structure:
I am aware that writers organise their ideas into paragraphs.
Visual Language Features:
I use visual language features to support meaning. e.g. illustrations and diagrams.
Punctuation:
I use capital letters, full stops, question marks, and exclamation marks correctly, and use commas for lists, speech marks, and apostrophes for contractions correctly most of the time.
Spelling:
a. I use my visual memory to correctly write most Spell-Write Essential List 1-4 words and many Spell-Write
Essential List 5-7 words, correctly.
b. I attempt unfamiliar words by using my knowledge of how words work.
(**see LLP for further details.)
STRUCTURE
Sentences & Grammar:
I write simple and compound sentences that vary in their beginnings, structures, and lengths and are correct grammatically, and complex sentences that are mostly grammatically correct (using conjunctions such as when, how, because, although).
Planning:
I plan and organise rich language, ideas, and information using a variety of planning tools.
Structure:
a. I organise my ideas into paragraphs.
b. I group ideas in paragraphs using related links within (and sometimes between) paragraphs.
Visual Language Features:
I use visual language features to extend or clarify meaning and to engage my audience. e.g. headings, titles, subheadings, labelled diagrams, charts, maps, and illustrations.
Punctuation:
a. I use basic punctuation that is mostly correct. e.g. punctuating dialogue.
b. I attempt some complex punctuation such as possessive apostrophes for possession, commas for clauses, or semicolons.
Spelling:
a. I spell most high frequency words correctly (all of Spell-Write Essential List 1-7 words)
b. I write most unfamiliar words, including words of many syllables, by applying common spelling patterns and using my knowledge of how words work.
(**see LLP for further details.)
STRUCTURE
Sentences & Grammar:
I write simple and compound sentences that vary in their beginnings, structures, and lengths and are correct grammatically, and complex sentences that are mostly grammatically correct (using conjunctions such as when, how, because, although).
Planning:
I plan and organise rich language, ideas, and information using a variety of planning tools.
Structure:
a. I organise my ideas into paragraphs.
b. I group ideas in paragraphs using related links within (and sometimes between) paragraphs.
Visual Language Features:
I use visual language features to extend or clarify meaning and to engage my audience. e.g. headings, titles, subheadings, labelled diagrams, charts, maps, and illustrations.
Punctuation:
a. I use basic punctuation that is mostly correct. e.g. punctuating dialogue.
b. I attempt some complex punctuation such as possessive apostrophes for possession, commas for clauses, or semicolons.
Spelling:
a. I spell most high frequency words correctly (all of Spell-Write Essential List 1-7 words)
b. I write most unfamiliar words, including words of many syllables, by applying common spelling patterns and using my knowledge of how words work.
(**see LLP for further details.)
PROOFREADING AND EDITING
Proofreading:
a. I proofread for grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
b. I reread my writing at various stages to check for meaning and purpose.
Editing/Recrafting:
a. I revise my writing (from a reader’s perspective) and edit it for clarity, purpose and impact.
b. I reread, discuss and respond to feedback by making changes to my writing.
PROOFREADING AND EDITING
Proofreading:
I proofread to correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation, using appropriate resources.
Editing/Recrafting:
I review and revise my writing to clarify meaning and add impact, often in response to feedback.
PROOFREADING AND EDITING
Proofreading:
I proofread to correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation, using appropriate resources.
Editing/Recrafting:
I review and revise my writing to clarify meaning and add impact, often in response to feedback.
** Bold text indicates National Standard indicators. ** Blue text are indicators specific to R.S.S