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Sunday, 26 May 2013

Thursday, 23 May 2013

Homework

Jets At Schools 
The jets are a local adult famous basketball team. They have kindly given their time to run coaching at Russell Street School (RSS). The Jets are currently coaching at RSS 
They come every  Thursday for the next 2 or 3 months. Sessions run from 1:30/3:00 pm.  You have to be playing basket ball at RSS to get sessions with the Jets. that's cool.
Children were happy to see the Jets and get their signatures.
The End
By Callum 

Wednesday, 22 May 2013

Mold In Cheese

Clue Cheese 
There are many kind of the at the top of the page has mold in it I think but don't worry this is eatable mold the mold below is not.



Thursday, 16 May 2013

Wednesday, 15 May 2013

Well Mold Go Inside

Will mold go inside the carrot and milk?

For milk :For milk it takes at lest 3 days out of the fridge at room temp.

Come To My Blog


Focus - Persuasive writing
Purpose (Why are we writing)- to advertise their class blog.
W.A.L.T make a persuasive poster
Success Criteria: see blog for co constructed criteria
Level 3 - Speaking, writing, and presenting - Purposes and audiences - Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences. INDICATORS: constructs texts that show a growing awareness of purpose and audience through careful choice of content, language, and text form. 

What do you know about being persuasive:

Nathanael - it's like deals
Ben I - it's like trying to get someone to do something that you want them to do
Luke - it's like persuading someone to do something for you - like buying something
JP - if you buy something you can get something else for free
Hunter - you persude them like saying something like "it will clean your house fast and efficient
Reuben - they usually sell things with 99cents at the end of it

Co constructed success criteria

A picture of your blog
Colour constrasting 
Big bold letters - link / blog address
Images - Of yourself / Avatar / your learning / posts
Interesting fonts
Reasons why you should go to your blog
Colourful and bright

Persuasive words  and phrases like....
Excellent, Awesome, Enjoy, wicked, creative, mind blowing
You need to visit my blog.....
I bet you'll like my blog because....
My writing is very descriptive....
Bigger, bolder, better...
Are you tired of the same old blog.....
Don't worry about those boring blogs come and visit mine.....
My blog is spontaneous visit me and your mind will be blown....




Tuesday, 14 May 2013

This Is Bananas

Apply our knowledge of the story.
Draft

Sunday, 12 May 2013

Holiday Writing - DRAFT


Because me and my dad were to meet and me dad are going to go on                                  
to got to the fery
I am in the car with my mum. Then suddenly when were driving around the conner we saw a wave come up the side of the road. That day was meant to be calm. What it would be on a rough day, I wish mum was going faster because I really busting to go see my dad I had not seen my dad in three months when mum pulled the car up I was jumping in my shoes when i saw my dad it was so exiting seeing my dad.
Focus - Recount writing
Purpose (Why are we writing)- to capture a moment in time over the holidays...
W.A.L.T write a recount about the holidays

Recount writing - This is what we think a recount is...
if you write then you look back onto it
is like something that has already happened
remembering something that has already happened - vivid image
you look back on something and you write about it
retelling something that has happened

Co constructed - Success criteria
make sure you write about a part of your holidays that you remember really well
make sure you don’t go too far, just keep it at that moment
at least 100 words
punctuation
paragraphs
our writing needs to be in order
Plan using who, what, when, why